Combining My Paper October 20, 2009

So at this point I really don’t have a clue where else to fix things, or make it better for the reader… thats why I’m really glad we have to do this peer editing thing. Well, about what I had to change or fix when combining my papers- there wasn’t too much for me to do, but one big thing that I hope I accomplished was keeping my focus the same through out each section. I am actually considering shifting my focus to sexual education more than teen pregnancy- so I think this was the most difficult part for me to stay consistent. I also tried to link my articles together, but I still have to go back and apply them throughout my writing and not just in one section. Basically, I think there is a lot of editing that still needs to be done haha… I am nowhere close to having a completed paper!

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